What Superpower Would You Have Essay

Hi,
Here is the prompt I wrote about:
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If you were a superhero, what would your super power be, why, and for what purposes would you use it?
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The essay needs to be around 500 words in length and the writing needs to be at college level. All spelling, punctuation and grammar matter. I would really appreciate it if you guys could take a look and see what needs improving or could be re-said in a different way. Anything will help. Thanks!

Essay:

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If I were a superhero, my power would be the ability to control time. With my power, I would be able to stop, reverse, slow down and speed up time whenever I pleased. People often ask, "If you could go back in time and change one thing, what would it be?" With my power, I would actually be able to do such a thing. Having control of time would give me control of any situation, whether it involves me or not.

One of the first ways I would utilize my superpower would be to make my life easier. If I didn't feel like waking up, I could just stop time and sleep in for a while. If I trip and start to fall, all I would have to do is slow down time and recover. Another way I would use for superpower would be to help me think through tough situations. Often, I am forced to make a split second decision that could negatively impact myself or others. Having the power to stop time would give me the ability to ponder the possible outcomes of my decision and allow me to chose the best option. Being able to control time would truly be an ultimate power to have.

While I would personally enjoy the benefits of my superpower, I would also use it to help others. Many uncomfortable and even deadly situations could be avoided with my ability to control time. For example, a car runs a red light and there is another car about to crash right into it. With my ability to slow down, stop and reverse time, I would be able to effortlessly forestall the accident from happening and prevent serious injuries. [don't know what else to add]

Although having the ability to control time would be a nice superpower to have, it would come with its share of drawbacks. Because I would be the only person to have access to this power, everyone would want me to help them; the demand would be overwhelming, to say the least. I would no longer have a normal life. Instead, my life would consist of constant requests for me to demonstrate my abilities. In order for me to have a superpower, I would need to sacrifice having a normal life, which to me, would be worth it.

Therefore, having the the ability to control time would be an amazing superpower to have. There would be many different opportunities to help myself and others. But, there would also be added responsibilities that I would have to deal with. For that reason, having a superpower is not always as great as it seems, but despite the drawbacks, it would be well worth it.

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I was not sure what format to put it in so I went with the 5 paragraph essay.
Here are the main things that need to be at college level:

-Spelling, punctuation, grammar
-Organization
-Clear/Easy to understand

Is this college level?

Thanks for reading

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Gilbert Maldonado

Teacher: Vernon Nelson

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I would want the power to duplicate myself. I could be at two places at the same time. I could be eating pizza and my duplicate could be doing homework.

Rey Perez

Teacher: Robert Leal

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Eating. I would love to eat, and eat, and eat, and never gain any weight. This "power" would be nice because I would be able to full fill my never ending hunger. I would not struggle with any weight or health issues, but I would just eat to my stomach's content. Now, I know this probably would not benefit or contribute any good to the world as a whole, but it would definitely make me happy.

Tony Hernandez

Teacher: Jean Bovee

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If I were a superhero I would want the power to help our planet. I want this power to stop global warming and make a brighter future for our children.

Elizabeth Vasquez

Teacher: Robert Leal

Veterans Memorial Academy

If I was a superhero and I could have any type of super power I would probably have to model my powers after Aqua man. He can live underwater and on land, and he can speak to fish along with being able to control water. Those have got to be the best super powers anybody could ask for.

Jesus Chavez

Teacher: Jean Bovee

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I would want the power of youth. I would like to stay the age of 25 and have fun forever.

Joe Mancillas

Teacher: Robert Leal

Veterans Memorial Academy

I would just like to move things with my head. It would make things easier since I'm already lazier than ever.

David M. Garza

Teacher: Jean Bovee

Weslaco High School

If I would have the power it would be to be any animal I wanted to be. I would fly like an eagle, as fast as a cheetah, climb like a monkey,

and be as strong as a lion.

Mario Moreno

Teacher: Robert Leal

Veterans Memorial Academy

If I was given the opportunity to possess any superhero power known to man, I would like to have the ability of making a person smile. I know that this power is not rare to find among people today, but it is still a wonderful and powerful gift to have. Mother Teresa once said "Every time you smile at someone, it is an action of love, a gift to that person, a beautiful thing." You can change a person's entire outlook on their day or even their life by simply smiling at them, or smiling with them. Either way, a smile can only benefit someone whether you wear it yourself, or helping them find theirs.

Vanessa Garza

Teacher: Jean Bovee

Weslaco High School

I would have the powers to do my homework in the blink of an eye and get all the answers right as long as I paid attention in that class period. I would also have speed and invisibility. I want the power of invisibility because there are days that I don't want to be seen because I don't feel very good and being invisible will help me a lot with those days.

Patrysha Rivera

Teacher: Wenndy Pray

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If I was able to choose any superpower for myself, I'd choose to be able to duplicate myself. I am a very busy person, at times. When I am working, I usually want to be out with my friends. Sometimes, I'll ask for days off just to be with my girls, and if I could duplicate myself, I'd be able to have fun and be in another place doing what I really have to do.

Victoria Garcia

Teacher: Jean Bovee

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If I could be any super hero or have any powers I world want to have some hulk and wolverine put together because I think it would make a good super hero with those powers. I would help out the good people of world and try to save the day from all the evil people. The reason I picked those heroes because I like the powers the Hulk has when he does the Hulk smash and I like the Wolverine because of the color he has and also the has the power to smell thing from a distance and mainly because of the iron claws he has when

on his hands

Jose Gonzalez

Teacher: Rosa Gonzalez

Weslaco East High School

If I were a superhero, I would have the power of telekinesis. I would be able to move things with my mind and also read other people's minds! It could come in handy!! I could read other people's minds and see if they were plotting to take over the world or something. I could move things with my mind and have less handy work. I could have much more energy to stop other evil villains!!!

Megan Mendoza

Teacher: Stacey Hill

Gutierrez Middle School

I want to be able to tell people what to do. The power of manipulation would be cool. I would tell people to do my job.

Jose Sanchez

Teacher: Robert Leal

Veterans Memorial Academy

If I were a superhero, I would like to have the power of reading minds. I would like to have that power because I could read my friends' minds when they are talking about me. I would also like to have that power because if someone is following me I will know what they are trying to do.

Erik Torres

Teacher: Vernon Nelson

Vernon Middle School

I were to be a superhero my power would be the power to change the world's mistakes. If I had that power there wouldn't be any wars, everyone would live in peace, and no one would ever be in danger.

Aimee Perez

Teacher: Robert Leal

Veterans Memorial Academy

If I was a superhero I would have some pretty awesome powers. Superheroes to me are wonderful! My superhero powers would be I could just automatically disappear anywhere and anytime, super strong strength, and eat whatever I want. I think my superhero powers would be so awesome.

Vanessa Cruz

Teacher: Wenndy Pray

Vernon Middle School

I would have super speed so I can finish my work quickly. I would have more time to sleep, I love to sleep.

Jose Rodriguez

Teacher: Robert Leal

Veterans Memorial Academy

I would want the power to fly. I want to see what is out there in the world. I would be able to fly away from all my problems.

Ivo Hernandez

Teacher: Robert Leal

Veterans Memorial Academy

If I were a superhero, my power would be to heal people so no more people would die of cancer or diseases. No one would have to pay thousands of dollars on hospital bills; which would help those who can't afford healthcare. If I had that power, life would be a lot easier for people

Gilbert Maldonado

Teacher: Vernon Nelson

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I would have certain powers that would only help me. I don't care if I sound selfish because that is the way most of the world is anyway. The powers that I would have would be to be able to read people's minds, but only when I want to because otherwise it would just get annoying. I would also have the power to tell the future and again I would have complete control over my powers.

Christina Rodriguez

Teacher: Robert Leal

Veterans Memorial Academy

If I were a superhero, I'd have the power of invisibility so that I could rob a bank and be the richest woman in the world. Then I'd live happily ever after.

Nina Avila

Teacher: Jean Bovee

Weslaco High School

Superheroes have at least one or two powers, but if I were a superhero, I would have seven powers. My first power would be to read minds from miles away or even of those who are close by. I would be able to block out the thoughts I don't want to hear, though. I would also have the power to see the future when something is decided. My other powers would be to heal fast, have turbo speed, and have super strength. I would also have the power to cause something or someone to endure pain. Mentally of course and only to those who hurt me in any way. Last but not least, I would have the power to fly and feel the wind hit my face as I soar freely in the air.

JoAna Garcia

Teacher: Jean Bovee

Weslaco High School

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